Say Less, Get More: The Science of Short Marketing That Works

A few months ago I made this video about how shorter marketing gets more results:

One word subject lines get the highest open rates.

Less syllables in a price increases purchases.

Short brand names are most memorable – Nike, Apple, Zoom, Bolt.

Short call to actions work best.

Shorter forms get more signups.

One sentence value props convert better.

Shorter menus increase sales.

Short headlines get more attention.

Quick replies close more deals.

Say less to get more.

Few better things than doing less and getting more.

BUT the top comment was people wishing I cited sources.

The Instagram comment I received: "Normalize including your sources before spreading misinformation?"

So that’s what I’m doing in this article.

It’s easier to make short videos go viral; funny enough, for this one people are asking for something long.

One word subject lines get the highest open rates

From one of my favorite newsletters – about conversion rate optimization: https://read.first1000.co/p/things-matter-for-growing-a-newsletter

A table comparing email newsletter open rates and subscriber growth across different factors, using rocket emojis (🚀) for open rates and shrug emojis (🤷) for growth. For send days, midweek emails achieve the highest open rates (🚀🚀) compared to weekends or the beginning/end of the week (🚀 each), though subscriber growth remains unchanged (🤷). Emails with emojis in subject lines slightly outperform those without (🚀🚀 vs. 🚀🚀), while growth does not differ (🤷). Time of day (9 am, 12 pm, or 9 pm) shows minimal variation, with low open rates and similar growth (🤷 across the board). Short subject lines perform best, with one-word subjects leading in open rates (🚀🚀🚀🚀🚀), followed by two-word (🚀🚀🚀) and longer ones (🚀🚀), with growth remaining steady (🤷). Non-clickbaity subject lines slightly outperform clickbaity ones in open rates (🚀🚀 vs. 🚀). Direct subject lines achieve better open rates than cute ones (🚀🚀 vs. 🚀). Weekly cadence generates the highest open rates (🚀🚀🚀🚀🚀), while biweekly (🚀🚀) and unscheduled emails (🚀🚀🚀) trail behind; interestingly, no-schedule emails drive the highest subscriber growth (🚀🚀🚀) compared to the consistent low growth (🤷) seen in other cadences.

And my newsletters with one word subject lines ALWAYS get higher open rates than 2 words, 3 words, or more.

Less syllables in a price increases purchases

There’s a lot written on how prices feel smaller with fewer syllables.

Here’s an example: https://myscp.onlinelibrary.wiley.com/doi/10.1016/j.jcps.2011.11.005

Consumers non-consciously perceive that there is a positive relationship between syllabic length and numerical magnitude.

Short brand names are most memorable - Nike, Apple, Zoom, Bolt

The Fluency Heuristic says people give more value to phrases that are more easily retrieved.

https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Rhyme-as-reason_effect

People do not always make decisions based on rational analysis or declarative knowledge.

The fluency heuristic is defined as the tendency to attribute higher value to objects or phrases that are more easily retrieved or processed. According to this heuristic, the perceived value of a phrase is linked to how quickly and effortlessly it is processed.

Short call to actions work best

Regular A/B testing often has concise CTAs winning out.

The most effective CTAs are concise and to the point. Long or complicated sentences can confuse users or make them hesitate. Phrases like ‘Shop Now’ or ‘Join Today’ are short, easy to understand, and create a sense of urgency. The goal is to make it as easy as possible for the user to act without overloading them with information.

From – https://www.networksolutions.com/blog/write-5-killer-calls-to-action/

Shorter forms get more signups

There’s a ton written on this. Here’s one such example:

An infographic showing how Imagescape reduced their contact form from 11 to 4 fields, gaining a 120% conversion increase from 5.4% to 11.9%.

One sentence value props convert better

Jury’s out on this. Some sources say 2-3 sentences, but there’s also lots of evidence supporting one sentence value props as best.

Here’s some strong one sentence value propositions:

Explore Your Creativity With Thousands of Hands-on Classes
-Skillshare

Affordable Legal Help Does Exist
-LegalShield

Pack Everything You Need Without Checking a Bag
-Tortuga Backpacks

Go Anywhere With Uber
-Uber

A screenshot of Uber's value proposition: "Go anywhere with Uber."

Shorter menus increase sales

Research shows most menus crowbar in far more dishes than people want to choose from. A popular study from Columbia University revealed that people actually prefer fewer choices – as it makes the decision process that much easier.

‘As we complicate menus, what we’re actually doing is tormenting the guest,’ says restaurant consultant Aaron Allen. ‘When the guest leaves they feel less satiated, and part of it comes down to a perception that they might have made the wrong choice.’ If you leave with a bad taste in your mouth, you’re less likely to come back. And in an industry where repeat customers account for about 70% of sales, getting diners to return is the ultimate goal.

From – https://foodtecsolutions.com/blog/2018/10/31/do-smaller-menus-yield-more-sales/

Short headlines get more attention

Findings showed that the most clicked-on headlines almost always scored higher on a simplicity index developed by the researchers. The study identified three hallmarks of simplicity in the winning headlines: They used common words; they avoided analytic writing, which tends to be more formal and complex; and they had fewer words per sentence and syllables per word.

From – https://news.osu.edu/simple-headlines-attract-more-online-news-readers/

Quick replies close more deals

Research confirms: Simpler communications are much more likely to be read… Cutting the number of words by two-thirds increased the response rate by 80 percent.

From – https://www.hks.harvard.edu/sites/default/files/HKSEE/HKSEE%20PDFs/Write%20shorter%20messages.pdf

On the sender side, crafting shorter emails can change your career and boost your bottom line.

From – https://www.fastcompany.com/3057577/the-life-changing-magic-of-shorter-e-mails

The best SEO is short

The easiest, least competitive, highest converting SEO is 415 word pages targeting warm searchers NOT 3,000 word articles targeting cold searchers.

This is exactly what my SEO course teaches. Here’s a video testimonial I received a few days ago:

William Bremer

As soon as I got the course and I went through the first couple of lessons, I went back to some of my previous SEO clients, with those new findings the course gave me, and I was able to secure new SEO contracts from clients that had previously ended SEO services with me. It also allowed me to align my SEO fulfillment team on Edward’s process because I didn’t have a strong process in place, and I had to be the primary strategist behind all of the SEO campaigns. So being able to take that course, I was able to create systems for my team to actually use and help handle the fulfillment.

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